tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2676691386361883927.post2930174374754844860..comments2024-02-28T12:45:42.761-05:00Comments on Hoosier Ink: Are You Dobbin-Driven?The ACFW INDIANA Chapter Bloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07282742986179364847noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2676691386361883927.post-37800305786383210082011-02-18T21:51:38.906-05:002011-02-18T21:51:38.906-05:00Thanks, Kathryn and Michelle! :-DThanks, Kathryn and Michelle! :-DStephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09888191800120017375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2676691386361883927.post-10016727002445279482011-02-18T09:55:42.351-05:002011-02-18T09:55:42.351-05:00I loved this creative blog. Well done. It was easy...I loved this creative blog. Well done. It was easy to read and taught me something. Thanks.Michelle Weidenbennernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2676691386361883927.post-32215440959017216102011-02-16T18:20:36.188-05:002011-02-16T18:20:36.188-05:00Years ago, someone in a critique group pointed out...Years ago, someone in a critique group pointed out that I always started my sentences with a noun (usually, but not always, followed by a verb). Now I make sure to change it up sometimes, maybe like this: "Sobbing, the women covered their faces with tear-soaked fingers."Kathryn Page Camphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03458122715766846442noreply@blogger.com